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be written as action. HOW TO FORMAT A SCREENPLAY BY DAVE TROTTIER By the way, the example is from The Screenwriter's Bible by Yours. Truly. Read "The Screenwriter's Bible, 6th Edition A Complete Guide to Writing, Formatting, and Selling Your Script (Expanded & Updated)" by David Trottier available. Apr 14, Praise for The Screenwriter's Bible A “bible” for those of all persuasions. Whether you are a rank beginner who needs instruction, or an old pro.

No part of this book may be used or reproduced in any manner whatsoever without written permission from the publisher, except in the case of brief quotations embodied in articles and reviews. Freeman Excerpts from Dr. Reprinted courtesy Joni Sensel and Northwest Screenwriter.

How to Write a Screenplay: A Primer How stories work Situation, conflict, and resolution—the flow of the story The lowdown on high concept Story-layering, plot, and genre Ten keys to creating captivating characters Theme Dialogue, subtext, and exposition How to make a scene Suspense, comedy, and television BOOK II: Proper Formatting Technique: Writing and Revising Your Breakthrough Script: How to Sell Your Script: A Marketing Plan Five steps to selling your work 1. Protect your work 2. Prepare your script for market 3.

Assemble your selling tools 4. Create your strategic marketing plan 5. Implement your plan How to find an agent Crafting the query How to pitch without striking out Synopses, one-sheets, treatments, and outlines How to sell your script without an agent Television markets Jump-start your career now! Where has the time gone? Since then, I have coached aspiring writers around the world.

And throughout this period, I have come to understand that there are core principles and techniques that help screenwriters get off to a fast start. The result is the sixth edition of my work, which I believe to be the best edition of the bunch, and clearly the timeliest. In fact, this 20th Anniversary Edition is dedicated to you, the developing screenwriter or pro, and to the students and clients who have inspired me with their dedication and creative vision. You have made this edition possible.

In this volume, I help you begin the screenwriting and script selling journey and guide you along the way. There are five guidebooks in The Bible. Each book is self-contained and can be read independently of the others. In addition, each can be used as a handy reference. You will find yourself turning to The Bible again and again.

Most writers, regardless of experience, will benefit from a thorough reading of all five books. How to Write a Screenplay is based on my award-winning audio series and national seminar. Books I and II can be used concurrently as you write your script. The other six steps include the pre-writing, writing, and revision phases. Proper Formatting Technique not only provides the crucial formatting standards by which your script will be judged, but teaches something of screenwriting itself.

Even if you have a complete knowledge of formatting, reading this book will improve your writing style. This formatting guide has become the de facto industry spec screenplay formatting standard. Writing and Revising Your Breakthrough Script is an annotated guide to spec writing. Since samples of spec scripts are so rare, this section will prove valuable to you because you must write a spec script to break into the business.

Try your hand at revising the poorly written sample scenes and then compare your versions with mine. Also review the first nine pages of an actual spec script with my line-by-line analysis. How to Sell Your Script presents a detailed marketing plan with useful worksheets that takes the mystery out of selling to Hollywood and to the many other screenwriting markets.

The plan is comprehensive as well as specific. If legal assistance is required, the services of an entertainment attorney or other competent professional should be sought. I invite you to share with me your reactions to The Bible, and I hope it becomes a help and a guide to your personal writing success.

I wish you the best. It is. Few developing screenwriters have mastered even the basics of screenwriting. If your script also presents a well-crafted story built on an original concept or premise and featuring a fascinating character with which people can become emotionally involved, there are agents and producers awaiting the advent of the next great screenwriter.

You can be that next great screenwriter if you work hard, learn your craft, and develop discipline. And there are going to be disappointments. But you can do it! Now stop for just a moment and say that to yourself. All successful screenwriters begin in the same way.

All write one or more feature-length scripts of about pages or so. Even if you want to write for television, your best means of entering the industry is via a feature script that you can use as a sample or a pilot. What is a spec script? Unless you are being paid in advance to write, you are writing a spec. Book II gives you specific direction in the writing process. Book III is your industry standard formatting and style guide, while Book IV will provide additional help in applying formatting and spec writing principles to the nittygritty of the actual writing.

A stage play is almost exclusively verbal; soap operas and sitcoms fit into this category. A movie is primarily visual. Yes, it will contain dialogue—it may even deal with internal things—but it is primarily a visual medium that requires visual writing. You may have that same common tendency to tell rather than show. Picture a stage play in which a babysitter cuts paper dolls with her scissors. The children are upstairs playing.

From the other side of the room, a robber enters. He approaches her with a knife. Just in time, she turns and stabs him with the scissors. Not particularly suspenseful. In an actual stage play, these people would probably talk to each other for 10 minutes before the physical confrontation, because the conflict in a stage play generally comes out in dialogue.

A novel may focus on the thoughts and feelings of each character. These inner conflicts manifest themselves through inner dialogue. However, a screenplay will focus on the visual and emotional aspects of the scene. The scissors penetrate one of the paper dolls. The doorknob slowly turns. A figure slides in through the shadows. His knife fills the screen. He moves toward her. The dog barks louder.

The intruder inches closer. But she is completely absorbed in cutting paper dolls. He looms over her. His knife goes up. The dog barks louder still. She suddenly becomes aware, turns, and impales the man with the scissors.

He falls. His legs twitch and finally become still. She drops the scissors and screams.

The focus here is on the action—the drama—because movies are primarily visual. Yes, there are notable exceptions, but you are wise to use the strength of the medium for which you have chosen to write. Inner conflict is great, dialogue is important to bring out interpersonal conflict, but make your screenplay visually powerful.

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Showing through action usually works better than telling with dialogue. Her book inspires Carl to have a new adventure. Always look for opportunities to make the abstract visual and the internal external. Accordingly, the content of your story requires a dramatic structure or form to give it shape. Structure is the skeleton on which you hang the meat of your story. And without that skeletal framework, your story content falls flat like a blob of jelly, incapable of forward movement.

Most beginning writers just begin writing without much thought of story structure—where are their stories going and how will they end? One of your first writing steps will be to construct a skeleton, a structural model of some kind. He finally settled on the deposition hearing as a way of giving the story content shape or structure.

Aristotle was right Aristotle wrote in his Poetics that drama and that includes comedy, since comedy is drama in disguise has a beginning, a middle, and an end.

These are the basic proportions of the three-act structure. If you like to think in terms of four acts, then Act 1 is the beginning, Acts 2 and 3 are the middle, and Act 4 is the end. A seven-act structure still has a beginning, middle, and end. Because a screenplay is about 90— pages pages at the most , the beginning is usually the first 15 to 25 pages. The middle is the next 50 pages or so, and the end is the last 10—25 pages.

Obviously, the exact length can vary, but the middle will always be the largest section. Setup, complications, and resolution All great screenplays have a beginning, a middle, and an end. During the middle, you complicate matters and develop the conflict, which should build to some kind of crisis. In the end, you conclude the story and resolve the conflict. The end is the payoff for the reader, for the audience, and for you. Put your hero in the proverbial tree, throw rocks at her, and then get her out.

Boy meets girl, boy loses girl and tries to get her back again, boy gets girl. Beginning, middle, and end. What about DOA? It opens with the ending. What is this story really about? The dramatic premise is this: Can he find his killer before he dies?

The story ends when he finds his killer. This is just a creative way of using the basic model. In Back to the Future, the beginning takes place in , the middle in , and the end in again. A very simple overall framework. Turning points. They are also called transition points, action points, plot points, and character crossroads.

Turning points are the twists and turns. They are the important events that complicate or even reverse the action, such as cliffhangers, revelations, and crises. Structure organizes these events into a story. The first big turning point ends Act 1 the beginning and moves the reader and the audience to Act 2 the middle.

The second major turning point moves the reader into Act 3 the end and the final showdown. This is the Crisis. Of all the crises in your story, this is the one that forces the central character to take the final action, or series of actions, that will resolve the story. How big an event? Ever since he was six, he has dreamed about attending college and working at Monsters, Inc. So Mike studies hard while a fellow student, Sulley, relies on his natural gifts to get by. Mike captures the pig, but Sulley takes the credit and is admitted to a top fraternity.

The resulting rivalry between the two students causes Hardscrabble to fail them both and drop them from the program. How can he possibly find a way to get Hardscrabble to readmit him to the program?

And what will he do with the anger he feels towards Sulley, who has destroyed his childhood dream? As you can see, this plot point clearly sets up everything that follows, both in terms of the action and the relationship.

Please note that, in this case, the Big Event does not involve bombs or a car chase. The Big Event causes that loss of control. In Cast Away, that moment comes when Chuck Noland is cast away.

In The Incredibles, Bob Parr is lured to a remote island for a top-secret assignment. In Up, Carl is about to lose his house, which represents his life with Ellie, so he uses balloons to literally uproot the house and head up and out to Paradise Falls. But he has a stowaway! Russell, a wilderness explorer, is on the front porch.

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The Big Event is the clincher in setting up your story and audience. They want to know what happens next. Everything looks bleak. It is the moment when it looks least likely that E.

What follows is the final struggle to get home. How will they ever escape the law now? In The Incredibles, how will the Incredible family defeat Syndrome when he has apparently defeated them? That leads to the final battle. In Titanic, the central character is Rose. The Crisis is precipitated by the separation of the lovers.

Jack is arrested for stealing the Heart of the Ocean. Cecilia has a crummy life, a crummy husband, and a crummy job, and lives during the Great or Crummy Depression. For relief, she goes to the local theater where, this week, The Purple Rose of Cairo is playing. The Big Event—right? So what will happen next—in the middle? Can you guess? This conflict will build to the Crisis.

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Just as Cecilia returns to reality in the end, so must we when we leave the movie theater. The Crisis in this film is not just a low point, but an event that forces the central character to make a crucial decision.

Once she decides, she can then move into the final act, the Showdown or climax and resolution of the story. The crisis decision As with The Purple Rose of Cairo, the Crisis often forces the central character to make a tough decision. What will he do now? Walt, in Gran Torino, really gets himself and his neighbors into a fix.

What can Walt do now to defeat this gang? In Aliens, the Crisis is precipitated when the little girl is kidnapped by the alien creatures, and the planet is about to explode. Ellen Ripley Sigourney Weaver must make a crucial, life-or-death decision. Will she abandon the planet and save herself? Or will she return for the little girl? She demonstrates her choice by igniting her flamethrower.

The perfect drama Many years ago, I discovered the perfect drama: Each has a problem. During the middle of the story, three more spirits appear to Scrooge, but the Crisis comes when Scrooge sees his name on a tombstone, and he asks the crisis question: We are allowed to catch our breath after each apparition.

In other words, this story is well paced. In terms of dramatic tension and conflict, your story also needs peaks and valleys. Remember that the peaks the turning points should get generally higher as the story progresses. She writes: It was ironic that I met another writer who shared my addiction to Starlight Mints. In my case, it began as an innocent habit.

I would keep a jar of mints beside my computer so I could have a little pick-me-up at any time during the day. Then a trip to the dentist revealed I had my first cavity in 12 years. I made the agonizing decision to give up mints. Comedy and story structure Does comedy use story structure? Effective comedy is built on the same principles as effective drama. The movies appear to be a kind of screen anarchy, but believe me, the process of getting it up there is much different.

It gets to be a very scientifically designed process, actually. We spend a lot of time. Obviously, the opening image—the first thing we see—makes your first impression.

It implies something about your story—the location, the mood, or even the theme. The screenplay Body Heat opens with these words: Her eyes reflect the desire that will drive the movie. Argo opens with the American flag burning at the embassy in Iran. Apocalypse Now opens with a jungle aflame and the surreal sounds of helicopters. Superimposed over this is the face of Captain Willard Martin Sheen watching a ceiling fan that reminds him of helicopter rotors.

He is recalling his last mission. He is defining the context of his story. What is the context of your story? It will include the atmosphere or mood, the location, the emotional setting, and the genre.

Genre in this book refers to movie type: Communicate something about the rules, parameters, nature, and culture of the special world you have created in the first ten pages or so. You set the tone. In Signs, first we see the farm; then we see the central character wake up. And then we see the crop circles in the corn.

O Brother, Where Art Thou? Seabiscuit opens with photos of Depression-era cars and assembly lines: In Ghostbusters, we see a librarian scared by a ghost and we laugh our heads off. Supernatural comedy. Then we see Dr.

Venkman Bill Murray hitting on a coed. There are probably a thousand ways to portray this, but the writers stay in the genre. Venkman pretends the coed has ESP and that she needs his tutelage and support to understand her gift. Confidential, we meet two Los Angeles police officers in the s.

Jerry Maguire opens with an introduction to the world of sports agenting. Scream begins with a long sequence of Casey Becker Drew Barrymore at home alone. Someone calls her, terrifies her, and asks her questions about horror movies.

The caller tells her the consequences are deadly if she answers the questions incorrectly. She answers incorrectly. Often this person will appear in the opening scene.

Obviously, the primary opposition character must be introduced as well. This person does not have to appear as early, but could. We generally think of the protagonist as the good guy or hero, while the antagonist is the bad guy. In creating a story, I think it is helpful to think in terms of a central character and an opposition character.

Usually the protagonist is also the central character, but sometimes the role of central character goes to the antagonist. In Amadeus, Salieri, the bad guy, is the main cause of action and, therefore, the central character around whom the story is built. His opponent is Mozart, the good guy. The same holds true for the Joker in The Dark Knight. The Joker is the main cause of action, the central character and the antagonist. And certainly in The Ladykillers, the central character is Professor G.

Dorr Tom Hanks , and he is definitely the lead antagonist. Claire, the wife, is the primary opposition character, even though she is the protagonist good guy. Marlene is a secondary opposition character.

In both Falling Down and Chronicle, the protagonist becomes the antagonist in the end. You can see why I believe it is helpful to think in terms of a central character and opposition character s.

One key to making a story dramatic is to create a strong central character with a powerful goal, and then provide a strong opposition character who consciously or subconsciously tries to stop the central character from achieving that goal. This assures us of conflict. And conflict is drama. Can there be more than one central character? Students often present examples of dual central characters in a movie, and in most cases, the reality is that there is just one central character.

In The Hurt Locker, we have three main characters, but the central character is Sgt. William James, who happens to enter the story later than the other two, but who is most prominent in the end and carries the theme about addiction to war.

Mike is the central character in Monsters University. In truth, this is a genuine ensemble piece with no clear central character.

All loose ends for all 10 characters are cleaned up nice and tidy. Ensemble films are certainly a valid form. Even so, they are usually difficult to write and sell; thus, I recommend that you build your story around one central character in your first screenplay. The Catalyst is when Deb meets Napoleon at his doorstep, where she tries to sell him beauty aids.

I explained that comedy has its roots in drama and then continued with the lecture. Encouraged, I blabbered on. And who does Napoleon end up with at the dance? And then he put the rest together.

That, combined with his earlier dazzling footwork, is the Showdown or climax. Napoleon has not one but two goals that drive this movie. So his dancing is not only the Showdown for the get-Pedro-elected action plot, it also sets up his climactic meeting with Deb at the tetherball court resolution of the relationship plot.

One way to avoid that is for something to happen in the first 10 pages.

It pains me to be so pointed, but I do so for your own good: I recall how delighted my agent was when he told me about a script he had just read, Regarding Henry. Imagine, shot on page seven!

Somewhere in the first 10 or 15 pages of your script or earlier , something should happen to give your central character a goal, a desire, a mission, a need, or a problem. Yes, it is a turning point. This term and many other terms are used in a variety of ways by industry people. For example, many writers and writing gurus think of the Big Event as the Inciting Incident. Defining the terms is less important than understanding the principle. I use terms that I believe will be the most helpful and least confusing to understand.

When a story begins, life is in balance. Then the Catalyst kicks things out of balance and gives the central character a new problem, need, goal, desire, or mission. The central character spends the rest of the movie trying to get things back into balance. The Big Event is his creation of the precursor to Facebook.

In this case, the Catalyst motivates or leads naturally to the Big Event. In Witness, an Amish boy witnesses a murder. It creates a problem or desire for Detective Book.

Now he wants to solve the murder. In other words, the Catalyst begins the movement of the story. But the Big Event in Witness occurs later. The little boy peers through the trophy case at the police office and spots a picture of the killer.

Book realizes that the murderer is on the police force. He goes to the chief and reports this. Do you see that the Big Event is bigger than the Catalyst? The event that changes his life, however, is when he returns to the scene to bring water to a dying man the only humane act in the movie. He is now pursued until he is finally killed. She decides that the only way to land a hunk like Ian is to get away from her family and improve herself. The Big Event is when Ian walks into the travel agency where she works.

And now Woody has something of a problem to solve. He pays her to stay with him at the hotel: Jerry Maguire sees his client in the hospital, then writes a mission statement: He is fired: Independence Day.

The aliens arrive: They attack and blow up the White House: They leave town to go fishing: You may ask, Can the Catalyst also be the Big Event? Ghost and Regarding Henry are two examples, as is Juno the pregnancy. Keep in mind that I am presenting guidelines in this book, not hard-and-fast rules.

It may raise the central dramatic question or obligatory question for that film. For example, will John Book in Witness catch the killer? Will E. Will Kowalski and Stone return to earth in Gravity? Will Edward and Viv find true love in Pretty Woman? Will Pi Patel survive his adventure in Life of Pi? Can J. Wiatt Diane Keaton have it all—a family and a career—in Baby Boom? Will Chuck Noland in Cast Away survive and return home? Will the Americans escape from Iran in Argo?

Often, a situation in a film can create a relatively minor obligatory question. The answer comes at the end: Tao gets it. This large contraption is literally an extension of her arms and legs. At the end of the movie, she uses it to fight the big mama alien.

Incidentally, we see a version of that contraption in the movie Avatar. We soon forget about it until it is skillfully used at the end of the movie to defeat the really bad military guy, Colonel Quaritch. The tetherball court is established in the first act of Napoleon Dynamite.

This new response is the measure of how things have changed for Napoleon. You can get away with almost anything if you set it up, or foreshadow it, early in your story. Much of screenwriting is setting things up for a later payoff. They can be pretty ridiculous, but as long as they are established early, we accept them.

Look at all we learn in the first scenes of Raiders of the Lost Ark. We learn that both Belloq and Indiana are resourceful, that Indiana hates snakes, and that he must recover the lost Ark of the Covenant. When we see this presentation again, Nash is the recipient. High Noon is a wonderful example of foreshadowing. The audience is made aware of the terrible thing that might happen at high noon. This foreshadowing helps motivate conflicts between Marshal Will Kane Gary Cooper and his wife, and with certain town folk.

In an early scene in Ghost, Sam Wheat Patrick Swayze watches an airline disaster on the news and comments about how quickly life can end.

Later he confides in Molly Demi Moore that he is afraid —every time something good happens in his life, something bad happens.

This is a foreshadowing of his imminent death. There is also a suspenseful moment when a statue of an angel is moved into the apartment. Can you guess what this foreshadows? Most are introduced early in the story.

The whistle. This is also introduced appropriately late, and its payoff is powerful. A more sophisticated use of foreshadowing can be found in Slumdog Millionaire. Early in this tale of two brothers, young Jamal is willing to jump into a pool of excrement to get what he wants—the autograph of movie star Amitabh Bachchan.

This is really a microcosm of the entire story. Jamal is willing to go through crap for his love, Latika. But Salim has a good side: He saves his brother from blindness and slavery, and at the end he frees Latika from slavery. Early in the script, a teacher asks the boys who the third musketeer is in the novel The Three Musketeers. Later, after they are orphaned, they see little Latika standing in the rain.

Well, she is the third musketeer.

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This kind of inventive foreshadowing creates a sense of unity in a story, even when the audience may not be consciously aware of the foreshadowing and payoff. It also becomes a tool of economy, providing more than one use for an object, story element, character, or line of dialogue. A word of caution on the first act taken as a whole: Only give the audience what they need to understand the story and its special world without confusing them.

As children, both Carl and Ellie are inspired by Professor Charles Muntz who later, with his dogs, becomes an opposition character. As they become acquainted we see the following visual moments among others: It contains no dialogue; many small, touching moments; and the following visual elements: Most everything that follows derives from the above.

Ellie and the house that symbolizes her become the motivating force of what Carl does thereafter. We see all of the above visual elements repeated later in the movie, including the grape soda pin. The above opening sequence is a wonderful example of foreshadowing, but it additionally illustrates the importance of establishing emotional, motivational, and visual elements early. The screenplay as a whole is a lesson in economy. The writers use objects and characters in this case, Muntz more than once, which lends the story a sense of unity.

This is cinema at its best. I call these The Magnificent 7 Plot Points. The Backstory The Backstory is an event that generally occurs before the movie begins. Other times it is revealed through flashback. Most often, it emerges through dialogue. The middle focuses primarily on the conflict and complications. The central character emerges from Act 1 with a desire to do something about the difficult situation created by the Big Event. Her action will likely fail, forcing her to take new actions.

There will be many setbacks in Act 2, as well as some breakthroughs or temporary triumphs. The long middle section Act 2 of a three-act structure usually focuses on a rising conflict rising action. Your reader will lose interest in a conflict that is merely repetitive: Strong subplots that crisscross with the main plot will help you avoid repetitive conflict because they will create more complications that ratchet up the main conflict.

Thus, the conflict builds or intensifies. The Midpoint At the Midpoint or Pinch of the story, about halfway through, another major event occurs. The central character often becomes fully committed. I sometimes think of it as the Point of No Return. In Ghost, this is when Sam, as a ghost, learns that his best friend is the one who had him killed.

In Dave, the Midpoint is when Dave defies the chief of staff and acts as president. This is truly a point of no return for Dave, the point when he becomes fully committed. There is no turning back now! Once she makes this decision to leave her social world, there is no turning back. She has reached the Point of No Return. Shortly after her decision, the ship strikes an iceberg. From the Midpoint on, the central character takes stronger actions, perhaps even desperate actions that threaten to compromise her values.

One or more temporary triumphs by the central character arouse the opposition, who now shows his true strength. There may be a major setback, followed often by a new revelation or inspiration. This is when Charlie Babbitt in Rain Man discovers that his brother Raymond is the Rain Man of his childhood, and that his dad protected Charlie as a baby by putting the Rain Man Raymond in an institution.

Notice the rising action in the second half of Gran Torino.

After spending his birthday with his Hmong neighbors, Walt Clint Eastwood puts Tao the boy who tried to steal his car to work in his yard.

Tao has gang problems, so Walt gets Tao a job. Walt reacts by beating Smokie and telling him to lay off Tao. This is the Crisis, the point when all seems lost, or when the central character faces a crucial decision. Often, someone or something spurs the character on to the Showdown. In Independence Day, the crisis is very dark, but a new revelation provides a glimmer of hope that moves our heroes to take one last gamble.

Basic American values and global unity are at stake. The same is true in Gravity. At the Crisis point when Stone Sandra Bullock turns off her oxygen so that she can die, she sees Kowalski who scolds her for giving up. In Moonstruck, everyone simply gathers around the breakfast table. Although Hollywood loves a happy ending, some of the most effective and affecting stories are bittersweet or end in some sadness: Easy solutions are not dramatic; better that your central character do his own rescuing in the end.

How does the writer compensate for this? Secondly, the pirates the teen pirate in particular elicit some sympathy or interest as desperately poor pawns of a warlord. Thirdly, the resolution is not easy, but is dramatic with plenty of conflict.

A lesser writer might have handled this with an overwrought line of dialogue: I realize there are exceptions to these guidelines. After all, the events in the magical land of Oz were part of a dream and the animals in Life of Pi were just representations of people—and I love those movies.

And apparently, everything in The Usual Suspects except the heist itself was made up by Verbal under interrogation. How about the ambiguous ending of All Is Lost—does it frustrate you or lead you to some kind of statement or theme about life and death? Beginning, middle, end. His attitude toward Christmas is neatly summed up in two words of dialogue: In the end, the change in Scrooge is revealed through his charitable actions and words.

And the older you get, the more this happens and the fewer things you love. And by the time you get to be my age, sometimes you only love one or two things. Neo in The Matrix realizes that he can view the matrix as software code. Thus, he is able to destroy the antivirus code Agent Smith.

In this case, the realization is what gives the central character the ability to defeat the opposition. Jerry Maguire brings many elements together in the Realization. This realization is never directly stated, but the audience recognizes it when Rod thanks Jerry in the interviews. Is Troy going to let Jerry represent him now? Looks like it to me. In Mr. Holland Richard Dreyfuss is rewarded for his years of dedication to teaching when all of his students return and play his composition for him.

He realizes that he has touched all of these students. In Groundhog Day, Phil Connors Bill Murray goes through the five stages of grief—denial, anger, bargaining, depression the Crisis , and acceptance—and then is presented to us at the town dance and bachelor auction. The town likes him, Rita likes him, and at long last he likes himself. In the beginning of Falling Down, we identify with William Foster Michael Douglas but soon lose affection for him as he declines.

Detective Martin Prendergast Robert Duvall , however, grows. So our affections shift to him. Prendergast has become a good cop and a man. Foster has a different realization. He has grown from sinner to saint. The realization of growth can be negative. At the end of The Godfather, Michael is able to lie to his wife while a patron kisses his ring.

We realize that he truly is the Godfather. The overall realization for you as a writer is this: All of these examples provide an emotional pay-off to the reader of your script and to your audience. Usually, the Realization is part of the Denouement. In summary, the Magnificent 7 Plot Points are: The Backstory usually happens before the story begins. It motivates or haunts the central character. The Catalyst kicks things off.

We move to Act 2. We move to Act 3 the end. The Showdown or Climax is the final face-off between your central character and the opposition. The Realization is usually part of the denouement. This book is not intended as a write-bythe-numbers text. It is your handy guide for a successful writing journey. In reality, you can do anything you want. Almost every guru and teacher has his or her model or paradigm for structuring and outlining a screenplay.

Among them are the following in no particular order: They are provided by master teachers and are all worthwhile. They use classic dramatic structure in inventive ways, in a few cases bending the framework. The tactic shocks the audience so forcefully that a tremendous amount of suspense is created, enough to carry us through the second act.

One is about how Jules Samuel Jackson comes to believe that God has a mission for him. Each of the two stories has a beginning, a middle, and an end, but the events are not presented in exact chronological order. Perhaps the most traditional and rigid of paradigms is the love story or rom-com romantic comedy basic structural model. The two lovers generally meet at the Catalyst and are thrown together by the Big Event. But the Backstory gives rise to a flaw which interferes with love.

Even so, they fall in love at the Midpoint or at least one does , and are separated at the Crisis. In the Showdown, one or both overcomes the flaw and they come together. In the end, the Realization comes that they will live happily ever after. Annie makes the Crisis decision by racing to the Empire State Building where she finally connects with Sam.

At a key point during the second act, John Nash faces a crisis decision: He must choose between his wife Alicia and his imaginary life. It is here he realizes that his imaginary friends do not age; he now believes he has found the key to solving his schizophrenia problem. This leads to the main Crisis that determines his fate. This is followed by a longer-than-normal final act. I have no quibbles with any choices made because they worked wonderfully!

Dramatic structure is at once firm and flexible. There are many ways to tell a story. In fact, I maintain that structure is not the same things as formula.

Your basic structure may change or evolve as you write, so be open to new, creative insights. Every story has its own structure, its own life, its own way of unfolding. Let your story and its characters use you, the writer, to express itself and themselves.

The title you choose for your completed work should be short enough to fit on the marquee. Like the headline in an ad, the title must stop the reader and pull him into the story. Spy Kids has a direct appeal to its primary audience. The premise is clearly implied: What if James Bond were a kid?

Super Size Me was enough to grab my attention. That expression is well known by most people. The title The Sixth Sense clearly communicates the genre and main idea of the story.

Although a little long, Honey, I Shrunk the Kids is a superb title. It effectively conveys the idea of a fun sci-fi family comedy. An example of an ineffective title might be Raiders of the Lost Ark. I heard Sydney Ganis, the marketer of this project, explain how much he worried about this title. Is this the football Raiders? How is this title going to fit on the marquee? Not to worry. The same is true for Argo; that title only makes sense after one has read the script.

Nevertheless, in almost every case, an effective title can make an important first impression for your script, especially if it hints of a high concept.

In the dizzying world of moviemaking, we must not be distracted from one fundamental concept: If a movie begins with a great, original idea, chances are good it will be successful, even if it is executed only marginally well. Find great ideas. Keep asking yourself, Do you have a good idea here? The concept sits at the core of every pitch, regardless of who is pitching to whom. When I hear a good concept, I immediately see a movie that I can sell.

I realize there is an element of subjectivity here, but that should come as no surprise. And as we will discuss later, most script deals are development deals in which your ability to execute an idea into a great script is paramount. Even so, look for great ideas. There is an implied structure in strong concepts. Two black brothers are out to adopt a younger brother to mold into an NBA player and get rich. They find only a white country bumpkin, then bring him to their neighborhood to make him a star.

You can almost see the beginning, the middle, and the end. You see the conflict. You see the fun. Concept comes in many forms. Ray Frensham. The Art of Adaptation. Linda Seger. James Mendrinos. Advanced Screenwriting. Writing for Television. Yvonne Grace. Anatomy of a Premise Line. Jeff Lyons. The Midpoint: Mary Mercer. The Minute Movie Method. Wallace Wang. What Are You Laughing At? Brad Schreiber. The Writers. Miranda J. Writing Dialogue for Scripts.

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Something happened before the movie began or sometimes in the first scene that deeply hurt the character. Even so, they fall in love at the Midpoint or at least one does , and are separated at the Crisis. Format" himself with additional examples of virtually every conceivable formatting situation.

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